1-2 good 3 needs to have grey to break up black a little, look at it again 4 fine, but next time, just indicate a mass of clouds rather than fuzzy blobs 5 probably bring black up on the right side to indicate the wall vs. the window 6 see if you can break up the grey, not not too much 7-10 good
1-2 good
ReplyDelete3 needs to have grey to break up black a little, look at it again
4 fine, but next time, just indicate a mass of clouds rather than fuzzy blobs
5 probably bring black up on the right side to indicate the wall vs. the window
6 see if you can break up the grey, not not too much
7-10 good