I marked some areas of concern. There are some areas where your draftsmanship is needing some help (ie cleanup of excess strokes, edges that are flat in some areas and curved on others, obvious painting strokes). You have too many light/shadow casts. I know the photo you took had multiples but it was because of our lighting and in this assignment, let's simplify to just the cast shadow and occlusion. Your shadow should be less curved and straighter if the object is a cube. Did the reference we took, show it as a more round shadow?
I marked some areas of concern. There are some areas where your draftsmanship is needing some help (ie cleanup of excess strokes, edges that are flat in some areas and curved on others, obvious painting strokes). You have too many light/shadow casts. I know the photo you took had multiples but it was because of our lighting and in this assignment, let's simplify to just the cast shadow and occlusion. Your shadow should be less curved and straighter if the object is a cube. Did the reference we took, show it as a more round shadow?
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