1, I would break up the black area of the ground with some grey, there's some nice repetition going on with the shadows that leads you down the road 2, kind of a hot mess, really no clear indication of any analysis of what Robh was trying to compose 3, I think a black hallway and even the black planter boxes on either side 4 good 5, I would get rid of the black piece in the upper left area, it's more distracting than helpful. Sometimes, even when we see something we need to synthesize and use our power to design. 6, values are wrong, look at it again, squint and analyze 7, Grant had this one, and I was thinking that maybe the light "columns" are actually a better composition element than the white box 8, another hot mess, no clear indication of anything useful 9 good 10, close, but I think the pool needs to be grey not black
1, I would break up the black area of the ground with some grey, there's some nice repetition going on with the shadows that leads you down the road
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3, I think a black hallway and even the black planter boxes on either side
4 good
5, I would get rid of the black piece in the upper left area, it's more distracting than helpful. Sometimes, even when we see something we need to synthesize and use our power to design.
6, values are wrong, look at it again, squint and analyze
7, Grant had this one, and I was thinking that maybe the light "columns" are actually a better composition element than the white box
8, another hot mess, no clear indication of anything useful
9 good
10, close, but I think the pool needs to be grey not black