1-2 good 3 the grey is the street and all bldgs are black, he's using the bldgs and the archway as a framing device for the people 4-5 good 6 I think needs more, it's kind of a complex image, but now that I look at it, it's just not enough. I'm wondering if adding the light beam "columns" would help. It would pull the eye down and provide some repetition 7 look at it again, I'm seeing it differently 8-10 look good
1-2 good
ReplyDelete3 the grey is the street and all bldgs are black, he's using the bldgs and the archway as a framing device for the people
4-5 good
6 I think needs more, it's kind of a complex image, but now that I look at it, it's just not enough. I'm wondering if adding the light beam "columns" would help. It would pull the eye down and provide some repetition
7 look at it again, I'm seeing it differently
8-10 look good